The rejection


I got an automated response from the closer job that I applied for, nope, rejected.

Asked for feedback, haven't heard back yet. 

I really wanted to know what went wrong so that I can learn from it, but I know that not everyone have the time or want to give feedback and I probably won't get any.

Maybe I need to send this to my accountability leader and get her opinion on this.  I know its bad, but I really need to know what part is bad.

Again, I know practice makes perfect.